Things that went well:
The purpose of the article and its message is clearly presented to the reader by the use of informal language. The use of rhetorical questions makes the piece look more professional and make the contact with the reader. Explaining different slang terms makes it easier for the reader to understand what slang is about. The use of pictures in the article also makes the article more appealing.
Things that need to be improved:
Use sub-headings, quotes and facts to make the article more clear and interesting, and to engage the reader even more. Try to think of some figures and statistics and also try to plan the article out first so then you know what you'll write about and you will not run out of time.
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