Sunday, 1 November 2015
The barrister transcript
The genre of this text is a transcript which is a part of a
cross-examination in a Scottish court. The use of language and its different
techniques makes the transcript more powerful as it allows the receiver
understand what the conversation was like in real life, and the relationship
which each of the participants shared with one another. The use of proper nouns
which are 'Mr. Peterson' and 'Mr. Neil' present that the barrister refers to
the participants by their surnames. Referring by the surnames shows the
profession of his role and the respect which is shown towards the individuals.
Perhaps, they could also be used to clarify who the barrister is talking about and
avoid any confusion. There are parts of the dialogue which seem to be prepared
and practised beforehand, for instance the majority of barrister's speeches.
There is a time limit for the trail to be run. Therefore knowing the speeches
helps to fit in the time frame and it also seems as if the barrister is
well-prepared. The spontaneous parts of the dialogue are those which were said
by Mr. Neil.''Er I accidentally (.) bumped it slightly with er the rear of my
car'' is an example of the spontaneous speech. The use of 'er' indicates the
long-thinking process which Mr Neil has experienced quite frequently throughout
the trail. It could also mean that he was unprepared or unsure of what he was
going to say. The brief pauses may suggest the beginning of the new sentence or
a short break to take the breath back. The spontaneousness of Mr Neil may make
other participants think that not everything that is being said is the truth.
''I was prosecuted (0.5) possibly a week or so later I believe'' This doesn't
give us a straight forward answer, as the participant took a longer time to
think and the answer which he provided didn't specify the date in which he was
prosecuted. Therefore this may suggest that Mr Neil was unprepared as no
adequate answer was provided. Barrister seems to be the most
powerful participant in the dialogue as he has the control over the dialogue
and he is the person who keeps it going. ‘’You can’t remember whether they came
to see you or not?’’ is a repetition of a question which was previously asked.
The use of repetition may suggest that Mr Neil was lying due to the hesitation whilst
replying, therefore the barrister has asked him again. Barrister uses complex
questions and sentences, to find out as much as he can about the event that has
happened, however Mr Neil’s replies are short and blunt often consisting of ‘no’.
This also suggests that the barrister has the most power, as he is the one
asking questions and making the dialogue flow. One of barrister’s speeches
sounds very interesting just as if he was attempting to introduce a bit of
humour into the conversation. ‘’Is that because the police have been to see you
so many times Mr Neil that you can’t remember what they were up to see
you about one incident (.) as compared to another incident?’’ The emphasis on ‘’so
many times Mr Neil’’ might make the receiver think that Mr Neil had been in a similar
situation previously.
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Some good choices of quote to focus on key issues. It is important to paragraph to guide the examiner through your points in a clear and structured way (to get good AO1 marks). To improve, work on exploring why what you've noticed may be the case by referring to the GRAPE e.g. when you said the other participants may doubt that he is telling the truth, why is this significant (mention that the barrister is trying to get Mr Peterson acquitted of the charge by making Mr Neill's claims look false and that the jury may be more convinced by the barrister's complex sentences (which you mentioned - well done) and more formal register (of practised and prepared dialogue) than by the non-fluency of Mr Neill's sponteneous speech features and uses of non-standard English e.g the clipping of them to em.
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